Post by SatoshiM on Jun 29, 2003 15:05:22 GMT -5
This is some story, not a fanfic about an anime, sorry!
[glow=yellow,2,300]Enjoy! ;D[/glow]
“The Hotel of Ageing”, or at least it was called such.
Satoshi, my best friend, and I have seen this place many times before while we rode our bikes home from school. We had no clue why that abomination of a hotel was this, but we were very curious. So one day, as we were walking home with our bikes, I just couldn’t stand it anymore! I just had to go in! There was nothing holding me back now! I told Satoshi I was heading for the door of the building, and of course he came along, too.
So then, we both went inside the hotel and looked around. Inside the light was on, but we couldn’t see anyone there. We looked at the guest book to see if anyone--if any one could stand such a dump-- had checked-in. Astonishing! A dozen of people listed, but not a single piece of luggage or even people! And some of ink on the pages of the book was still fresh!
This was odd, very odd I thought. But then, I noticed a bell was next to the book. I explained to Satoshi if we ring the bell someone is bound answer to it--if there really is anyone here, I hope.
We started ringing the annoying bell as loud as we could, but no answer. We rang the annoying twice, and still there was no reply. It was as if we were on earth and all existence of mankind was totally obliterated! This was starting to annoy me! People! What’s a hotel without people!? I began to give up, I knew it was just going to be a big waste of time! So I called for Satoshi and we both started for the door.
We opened the door, but once we got outside the world had changed! The buildings that were neighboring the hotel were gone! In fact, all of it was gone! The buildings, the signs, the theater across street, even the rode! It was gone, it was all gone! The only thing left was the crummy hotel and some the large craters where possibly some massive meteorites have hit the earth’s surface. The earth was now a barren wasteland, a gigantic rocky desert.
I rushed back to the hotel. How could this have happened, I thought while I was running. I tried to check to see if Satoshi was right behind me, but I was way too shocked to even look anymore! That’s when I noticed the calendar in the front window of the hotel. I was just about to faint when I saw what was on it.
The year was 2058! I started panic. How could it be over fifty years into the future?! We were only in that torn-down dump for two minute. And then, something struck me. “Wait a second, we were only in there for two minutes? Oh my goodness! I forgot all about Satoshi! Where is he? I got to find him!” I had said (aloud finally).
Hours passed by; at least I hope they were just hours. I looked and looked and looked, but the only thing I could see was dirt, dirt, and yet again more dirt. As I searched the rocky terrain of abandon earth, I noticed that meteorites seem to be attracted more to the earth now.
The sun is now just about to set, and still no sign of him. And then, I saw something in the horizon. It looked like a person lying on the ground. I ran as fast I could to the object in the distance. As I got closer to it, I could see it was a person! It was a familiar looking old man in his late sixties. He had his hand on his chest as if just had a heart attack. Well, he certainly not moving and he did have a pulse, so I assumed that this frizzled old man was definitely dead. So I left the guy, since there wasn’t any hospitals, and started on journey to find my long lost friend. But I still couldn’t shake the feeling that I think that I’ve met that ‘ole hag before...somewhere before.
Man, I got to stop opening my BIG mouth!
Satoshi H.
1988-2058
[glow=yellow,2,300]So what do you think?
Does it suck?
Or is it great?
Or did you even understand it?
[/glow][shadow=silver,left,300]
Post all your questions or comments here! ;D
Thank You!
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[glow=yellow,2,300]Enjoy! ;D[/glow]
“The Hotel of Ageing”, or at least it was called such.
Satoshi, my best friend, and I have seen this place many times before while we rode our bikes home from school. We had no clue why that abomination of a hotel was this, but we were very curious. So one day, as we were walking home with our bikes, I just couldn’t stand it anymore! I just had to go in! There was nothing holding me back now! I told Satoshi I was heading for the door of the building, and of course he came along, too.
So then, we both went inside the hotel and looked around. Inside the light was on, but we couldn’t see anyone there. We looked at the guest book to see if anyone--if any one could stand such a dump-- had checked-in. Astonishing! A dozen of people listed, but not a single piece of luggage or even people! And some of ink on the pages of the book was still fresh!
This was odd, very odd I thought. But then, I noticed a bell was next to the book. I explained to Satoshi if we ring the bell someone is bound answer to it--if there really is anyone here, I hope.
We started ringing the annoying bell as loud as we could, but no answer. We rang the annoying twice, and still there was no reply. It was as if we were on earth and all existence of mankind was totally obliterated! This was starting to annoy me! People! What’s a hotel without people!? I began to give up, I knew it was just going to be a big waste of time! So I called for Satoshi and we both started for the door.
We opened the door, but once we got outside the world had changed! The buildings that were neighboring the hotel were gone! In fact, all of it was gone! The buildings, the signs, the theater across street, even the rode! It was gone, it was all gone! The only thing left was the crummy hotel and some the large craters where possibly some massive meteorites have hit the earth’s surface. The earth was now a barren wasteland, a gigantic rocky desert.
I rushed back to the hotel. How could this have happened, I thought while I was running. I tried to check to see if Satoshi was right behind me, but I was way too shocked to even look anymore! That’s when I noticed the calendar in the front window of the hotel. I was just about to faint when I saw what was on it.
The year was 2058! I started panic. How could it be over fifty years into the future?! We were only in that torn-down dump for two minute. And then, something struck me. “Wait a second, we were only in there for two minutes? Oh my goodness! I forgot all about Satoshi! Where is he? I got to find him!” I had said (aloud finally).
Hours passed by; at least I hope they were just hours. I looked and looked and looked, but the only thing I could see was dirt, dirt, and yet again more dirt. As I searched the rocky terrain of abandon earth, I noticed that meteorites seem to be attracted more to the earth now.
The sun is now just about to set, and still no sign of him. And then, I saw something in the horizon. It looked like a person lying on the ground. I ran as fast I could to the object in the distance. As I got closer to it, I could see it was a person! It was a familiar looking old man in his late sixties. He had his hand on his chest as if just had a heart attack. Well, he certainly not moving and he did have a pulse, so I assumed that this frizzled old man was definitely dead. So I left the guy, since there wasn’t any hospitals, and started on journey to find my long lost friend. But I still couldn’t shake the feeling that I think that I’ve met that ‘ole hag before...somewhere before.
Man, I got to stop opening my BIG mouth!
Satoshi H.
1988-2058
[glow=yellow,2,300]So what do you think?
Does it suck?
Or is it great?
Or did you even understand it?
[/glow][shadow=silver,left,300]
Post all your questions or comments here! ;D
Thank You!
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jk lol I'll happ to read it!